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Lizard at Capital Reef Utah by =clinekurt78:iconclinekurt78:

Categories Photography > Animals, Plants & Nature > Reptiles & Amphibians

©2009 =clinekurt78
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Lizard at Capital Reef Utah

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`velociraptor May 25, 2009, 5:52:51 PM
I love the overall composition of this piece with the lizard positioned nicely at the top 1/3 of the frame and the curve of the rock making a nice leading line to travel along. I also like the way the lizard seems to be sizing up the viewer.

I am not sure what your intention was but I feel that the photo would have alot more impact if the focus was more on the head rather than the body/claws of the lizard. A closer crop may or may not work here as the curve of the rock also helps in the composition but a closer crop might also bring more attention to the lizard.

Overall though I find this photo pretty good with just that slight focus issue :)
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~Seeker-Mar Jun 21, 2009, 6:51:57 PM
Hi I was reading `velociraptor's critique and came over to check this out. I love how the lizard is looking right a the viewer. I also like the faded background.

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=clinekurt78 Jun 22, 2009, 8:41:58 AM
thank you so much for your comment. i really appreciate it! your work is really great as well... keep it up...

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~Seeker-Mar Jun 23, 2009, 12:36:16 PM
You're welcome. :-) Thanks!

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But the wisdom that comes from heaven is first of all pure and full of quiet gentleness. Then it is peace-loving and courteous. It allows discussion and is willing to yield to others; it is full of mercy and good deeds. James 3:17
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D80
1/100 second
F/10.0
200 mm
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May 23, 2009, 11:50:09 PM

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