I love the overall composition of this piece with the lizard positioned nicely at the top 1/3 of the frame and the curve of the rock making a nice leading line to travel along. I also like the way the lizard seems to be sizing up the viewer.
I am not sure what your intention was but I feel that the photo would have alot more impact if the focus was more on the head rather than the body/claws of the lizard. A closer crop may or may not work here as the curve of the rock also helps in the composition but a closer crop might also bring more attention to the lizard.
Overall though I find this photo pretty good with just that slight focus issue
Hi I was reading `velociraptor's critique and came over to check this out. I love how the lizard is looking right a the viewer. I also like the faded background.
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I am not sure what your intention was but I feel that the photo would have alot more impact if the focus was more on the head rather than the body/claws of the lizard. A closer crop may or may not work here as the curve of the rock also helps in the composition but a closer crop might also bring more attention to the lizard.
Overall though I find this photo pretty good with just that slight focus issue
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